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Wednesday 14 June 2017

The Taniwha at the Marae.

The Taniwha at the Marae.
 
The taniwha waves his golden and blue tail at the gateway He sleep waiting for the kids on the HES bus to come.

Then the bus came all the kids. All the kids run off the bus to the gateway. The taniwha ran to the back.
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7 comments:

  1. Whaea Georgia2 August 2017 at 22:55

    I enjoyed reading your taniwha story Eden. I has descriptively crafted language such as 'waves'. Keep up the writing, and make sure to publish it to your blog.

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  2. Anonymous3 August 2017 at 18:57

    thank you for your advice hope you liked my taniwha story

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  3. Anonymous8 August 2017 at 18:58

    I liked how you said 'The Taniwha waved his golden and blue at the gateway' I think next time you do writing on your blog you should do more writing . I wonder if what the Taniwha was doing at the back

    By : Devon and Sariah

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    1. Anonymous9 August 2017 at 16:16

      ok thank you Devon and Sariah


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  4. Unknown8 August 2017 at 19:07

    That was a amazing story, maybe next time you could add more

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    1. Anonymous9 August 2017 at 16:17

      thank you but next time i add more

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