Wow Eden. This is an interesting visual display of your Parkour moment in time. You are beginning to add descriptive sentences to create a clear image in my head as your reader. I wonder if you could add more writing to this moment. I am very impressed by the detail of your picture. You could add even more by zooming in on the drawing.
Please go through all your blog posts and add in titles.
Wow Eden. This is an interesting visual display of your Parkour moment in time. You are beginning to add descriptive sentences to create a clear image in my head as your reader. I wonder if you could add more writing to this moment. I am very impressed by the detail of your picture. You could add even more by zooming in on the drawing.
ReplyDeletePlease go through all your blog posts and add in titles.